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Misleading thumbnail...

Haha I love the game! Nice one, made me chuckle

Just like they said. You draw good and should use it to make more movements in the animation! (Adding more frames)
Keep on creating ^^

I get a feeling that you like "Rick and Morty"! The date reminded me of Jessica.

Really liked it!

All the colours, the animations and, best of all, the style it was made in. A charming creation that makes you happy. Thank you, keep the good work up!

Hm... the idea was nice but it was kinda hard to know whom was talking when they both had the same voice and didn't move while talking.

My advice: Make it clearer with more animation (movements).
Add more effects, example the fire in the background could have been burning with three simple frames or mouths while speaking (Y)

I watched your other animations and if this is your style, go on! but adding that little nodding and so on makes it clearer.

Keep on creating!

SeveralHatProduction responds:

great feedback! Only began animating 4 days ago so i'm not quite at the point where i feel like i can do lip syncing on my characters but i'll definitely add nodding or some sort of indication. I'll try make the difference in their voices a little clearer too.

I liked the concept and all, extra points for bees with glasses, but re-check your upload! I couldn't hear the song you were talking about... So please fix it so I can watch it again complete ^^

well, I didn't understand ANYTHING of the context until I looked at your Newgrounds profile but it is a improvement compared to the earlier animation, nice!

Are you using Flash?

Titidagyk responds:

Yep, I'm a noob with flash, i just buy it like two weeks ago, i made my last animation or the one that you just see, In one day, thanks for the feedback, it really help me to keep doing animations n.n and yep, i know that isn't to much the improvement of the last and this but, i really aprecciate that you see it n.n, like i say, i just make this animation on likeeeee 10 hours, beside it, i really aprecciate all the feedback that i get, thanks again for comment n.n

Haha this was awesome!

This was awesome! Loved the style, nice effects, sweet ass song och funny!

Indeed deserved 5/5 stars!

Hello, welcome to my page! Enough dreaming, time to become a Sakuga! "The only limitation in animation is the person doing it. Otherwise there is no limit to what you can do. And why shouldn't you do it?" - Emery Hawkins

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