Yozan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cats II - NoahProductions]

I understand the context but the animation wasn’t explaining much “why” they were fighting :) I do get it, cats are assholes! But it would have been nice to see the first one.
Some frames are jumpy, missing colouring and it would have been better if you uploaded it as a video with a pause/play button! If you export the video into .swf, use swivel to convert it! Good quality and it even allows you to make a watermark on your video (if you want your logo and so on) created by Newgrounds

link to download here (also, it's free)

https://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/creator-resources/flash-resources/swivel#wiki_toc_2

otherwise, good job and keep on animating (Y)

NoahProductions responds:

you can actually view the first one at https://www.noerzzz.newgrounds.com (although there isn't much reasoning, i just wanted to make people relate) and thanks for pointing out the mistakes, i'll be sure NOT to overlook them next time.

I have used swivel before, however i find it easier to upload an swf. to newgrounds as it skips the converting part. It also gives a retro 2000s styled vibe (to an extent) and i like that.

Thanks for the friendly criticism, and have a nice day :D

[Legs Meme by Cartoon Network, totally legit!]

I regret not reading the description ... goodbye ears!

MelancholyFox responds:

Allahu akbar!

[Winter Adventure]

Well for being made in paint and Movie Maker it wasn't that bad! But you should have adjusted the scale of here while climbing the top. She got bigger than the trees... Keep on animating!

frame-by-fram for the win!

[D.I.E.T.Y. Intelligence|Jesus Christ]

I'm not quite sure what I just saw.. but there was a frame when an arm wasn't attached to the body. When Jesus is in profile.

kaxblastard responds:

This bothered you?

[Lil' Duckie Loop]

You can animate a duck walking but not a tree? This duck was even uploaded as gif on imgur back in march, before this animation was made. You need to refer to the original creator.

[♪ The Afterlust ♪]

Well I understand the concept but it wasn't quite there. I must say that Mclelun makes incredible art and FinnMK did an awesome song but your characters combined with all this doesn't fit in my opinion. If you did more movements in the animation like when they are holding hands it would give a better feeling into it.

You did spend your time to put all of this together but keep in mind for the future that if you use high quality material, you must keep up the rest of it to make a solid profit. That's all from me!

Keep on doing a great job!

[Silver Cell Perfect vs Piccolo God Blue]

I can't believe that this upload only has 2/5 stars! I agree that it's not much that's happening in the animation but this is way better than recent crap that has been posted. People focus on wrong things.

In my opinion you did a great job. I like the effects, colours and even though you lacked movement the few motions you had were great.

Factykillian responds:

Thank you very much my friend, if I try hard to do it, I also want to continue the fight of these characters in another animation.

[Love, Honeydew!]

Like it because of the the Beatles inspiration!

Animation-S responds:

Thank you! The singer has a lot of fun writing and finding the music. :)

[African zombie slut]

Why did you upload it now? It's like more than a month left until Halloween, you could have worked more with this ^^

flashmakeit responds:

I think I am going to take this out of the contest and make another one that is scarier.

[The cool dudes go to the museum]

Smashing story!