Yozan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Winter Adventure]

Well for being made in paint and Movie Maker it wasn't that bad! But you should have adjusted the scale of here while climbing the top. She got bigger than the trees... Keep on animating!

frame-by-fram for the win!

[D.I.E.T.Y. Intelligence|Jesus Christ]

I'm not quite sure what I just saw.. but there was a frame when an arm wasn't attached to the body. When Jesus is in profile.

kaxblastard responds:

This bothered you?

[Lil' Duckie Loop]

You can animate a duck walking but not a tree? This duck was even uploaded as gif on imgur back in march, before this animation was made. You need to refer to the original creator.

[♪ The Afterlust ♪]

Well I understand the concept but it wasn't quite there. I must say that Mclelun makes incredible art and FinnMK did an awesome song but your characters combined with all this doesn't fit in my opinion. If you did more movements in the animation like when they are holding hands it would give a better feeling into it.

You did spend your time to put all of this together but keep in mind for the future that if you use high quality material, you must keep up the rest of it to make a solid profit. That's all from me!

Keep on doing a great job!

[Silver Cell Perfect vs Piccolo God Blue]

I can't believe that this upload only has 2/5 stars! I agree that it's not much that's happening in the animation but this is way better than recent crap that has been posted. People focus on wrong things.

In my opinion you did a great job. I like the effects, colours and even though you lacked movement the few motions you had were great.

Factykillian responds:

Thank you very much my friend, if I try hard to do it, I also want to continue the fight of these characters in another animation.

[Love, Honeydew!]

Like it because of the the Beatles inspiration!

Animation-S responds:

Thank you! The singer has a lot of fun writing and finding the music. :)

[African zombie slut]

Why did you upload it now? It's like more than a month left until Halloween, you could have worked more with this ^^

flashmakeit responds:

I think I am going to take this out of the contest and make another one that is scarier.

[The cool dudes go to the museum]

Smashing story!

[Vattaman The Mans-Spankcula]

I like it that you are original but your intros are too long and missleading. The title says "how to draw" but with all the logos and so on makes it as if it was a movie.
The song... it gave me a headache with all the different sounds ... sorry. Next time try to make it shorter but keep it in your style. Work on ^^

ToonymanStudios responds:

sorry for all that, but this was like an old project I had left behind (like a lost episode). I still have like 10 more that I like to release but i been between school, work and community services. so i have not had alot of time to properly make these. but one thing for sure these are all just pilots. you should read the description. non of these episodes are the real thing as they are for showing you (as per the title) what I plan on including into the real episodes. from real how to's and real show and tells.

this is the introductory series which is part 0 of 5 different types of series. no actual work should be expected from this series which has a total of 50 episode of me showing what to expect from the real series. and the music was also old tracks I created hopefully when i get time i will create better songs (FYI not that great with music). I could use some free ones but i wanted to keep everything original kinda like giving people a full show that is 100% natural and original. i aim to making this a great show for the real series i'm still working on the details.