Yozan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MiniClip - Lets Do This!!!]

The animation and art was good! I don’t understand why it’s only voted two stars … I will try to change that. Of course, there are some things to clean up with this and it wouldn’t kill if there was some kind of music or sound added to it but yeah, short and promising for the future!
Keep on animating and make something out of this! Good job.

Chmoobie responds:

Thanks for the starts
I was gonna play the music I made for it but the file but the file got deleted so i did know what to do maybe next time :L
thanks for the comment

[Sword Demo]

I don't agree with WAHULK666. This was not trash but it could need a clean up in the animation! But you got more skills than a lot of people so keep up the hard work! :)

BeaverAnimations responds:

thank you man ! :D

[Jimmy and the Snowman]

Ha! Nice animation and even if Jimmy got eaten it was joyful! Merry Christmas!

Johnopotamus responds:

Thank you!
Jimmy lives on! He's just a scary snowman boy who's out for blood.

[Battle Brawl trailer #1]

Well it's more confusing and the height of the video made it irritating, to be honest.
Use the standard height and width next time and some content that give us, the people watching, a chance to understand what we are expecting to see in the future. :)

Animationking44 responds:

Thankyou your constructive helpful advice i'm new to animations and i really need help a new is coming out and it is much better

[MurderLands - HistoruOne; BEETS]

Interesting... what is it? ^^

MRat responds:

It's the first in a miniseries introducing the universe of MurderLands, a 3DS game I'm making with my brother. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCNY9S4kG6TlAhdDfCGScf1A

[Cats II - NoahProductions]

I understand the context but the animation wasn’t explaining much “why” they were fighting :) I do get it, cats are assholes! But it would have been nice to see the first one.
Some frames are jumpy, missing colouring and it would have been better if you uploaded it as a video with a pause/play button! If you export the video into .swf, use swivel to convert it! Good quality and it even allows you to make a watermark on your video (if you want your logo and so on) created by Newgrounds

link to download here (also, it's free)

https://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/creator-resources/flash-resources/swivel#wiki_toc_2

otherwise, good job and keep on animating (Y)

NoahProductions responds:

you can actually view the first one at https://www.noerzzz.newgrounds.com (although there isn't much reasoning, i just wanted to make people relate) and thanks for pointing out the mistakes, i'll be sure NOT to overlook them next time.

I have used swivel before, however i find it easier to upload an swf. to newgrounds as it skips the converting part. It also gives a retro 2000s styled vibe (to an extent) and i like that.

Thanks for the friendly criticism, and have a nice day :D

[D.I.E.T.Y. Intelligence|Jesus Christ]

I'm not quite sure what I just saw.. but there was a frame when an arm wasn't attached to the body. When Jesus is in profile.

kaxblastard responds:

This bothered you?

[Silver Cell Perfect vs Piccolo God Blue]

I can't believe that this upload only has 2/5 stars! I agree that it's not much that's happening in the animation but this is way better than recent crap that has been posted. People focus on wrong things.

In my opinion you did a great job. I like the effects, colours and even though you lacked movement the few motions you had were great.

Factykillian responds:

Thank you very much my friend, if I try hard to do it, I also want to continue the fight of these characters in another animation.

[Love, Honeydew!]

Like it because of the the Beatles inspiration!

Animation-S responds:

Thank you! The singer has a lot of fun writing and finding the music. :)